高考英語滿分作文：給房東留言

發(fā)布時間：2025-11-21 | 來源：互聯(lián)網(wǎng)轉(zhuǎn)載和整理

1.外出購物

2.替房東還書

3.Tracy 來電話留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消

2)此事已告知Susan

3) 盡快回電

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Mrs. Wilson,

I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

Yours,

Li Hua

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本文屬于提綱式要點作文，是學生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語學習應該注意實用性，生活型的原則。行文人稱、時態(tài)運用恰當、準確，各個要點間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個要點合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細組織語言，合理安排結構。在語言方面，要特別注意簡潔明了，開頭要開門見山。